Shadow Hamilton Poet Couplet

Fantastical Unicorn Flight

Creature of mystical powers
please will you give me an answer

May i please ride with you tonight 
 through  dark skies of sparkling starlight

I long to join you in your flight
you pause allow me to alight

We race through the  dazzling skies
I grip very tight with shaking thighs 

Looking around me so full of wonder
thinking nothing could  be greater

Then flying down I hug you tight
let you return to twilight

contest Any New Poet written 05/22/2013

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Skat A May 26, 2015 at 6:13 PM Shadow, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~ Shadow Hamilton May 26, 2015 at 7:04 PM ty Skat hugs

Robin Davis January 5, 2014 at 1:34 PM Shadow What a charming and creative write. You kept the readers attention on these beautiful and wonderous creatures. Nice job Thanks for the congrats and nice comment on my Horsie poem. Shadow Hamilton January 5, 2014 at 1:44 PM Ty Robin unicorn are special Shadow x smile hug

Suzanne Delaney June 30, 2013 at 7:35 PM Congratulations Shadow Love your mystical unicorn ride. SuZ

Donna Jones June 24, 2013 at 6:25 PM Congratulations Shadow...:-) Shadow Hamilton June 24, 2013 at 6:29 PM tnx Donna congrats to you as well seeing you in results Shadow x smiles

Cherie Thomas June 23, 2013 at 6:47 AM This is enchanting & a beautiful piece, shadow, congratulations on your win!!! Shadow Hamilton June 23, 2013 at 9:04 PM ty so much Cherie delighted you like it Shadow x smiles

Heather Secrest June 22, 2013 at 5:06 PM i love this poem!! Unicorns are amazing creatures!!! I adore them!! Congrats on the win.

Kate Wilderson June 22, 2013 at 5:20 AM Lovely...full of magic. :)

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2013 at 9:46 PM dang, now I wish more than ever I'd written of unicorns, seeing how well you love them here!!! Congrats to you, Shadow! Shadow Hamilton June 21, 2013 at 3:36 AM Nature Andrea that's my love and all the fantastical myth creatures and fairies lol ty dear Shadow x smiles

Richard Lamoureux June 20, 2013 at 7:34 PM So nice to see your name at the top of the list. You should be very proud, Linda has a good eye for talent. Hugs Rick Shadow Hamilton June 20, 2013 at 7:44 PM hi Rick and Ty for your encouragement and inspiration I am humbled by the response to my work. Linda has held out a hand of friendship from day 1 a great lady and poetess Shadow x smiles

Connie Gildersleeve June 20, 2013 at 3:23 PM Shadow congratulation on your excellent win. If I've not personally welcomed you- WELCOME. I look forward in reading more of your poems. Warm Smiles, Connie Shadow Hamilton June 20, 2013 at 3:36 PM aww Ty Connie much appreciated and ty Shadow x smiles

Poet Destroyer A June 20, 2013 at 1:38 PM Hello Linda, ;-) Congratulations!!! Thank you for entering one of my latest contest. please enjoy all the other winners who took their time in entering the same contest you did. you can find the list on the -Contest Winners: Member area- or you can visit my newest blog called ""from HEART to HEART ..."" stop by if you like. always & forever *LINDA Shadow Hamilton June 20, 2013 at 2:02 PM ps Ty for running contest Shadow x Shadow Hamilton June 20, 2013 at 2:01 PM ty Linda will do and ty for my place much appreciated Shadow x smiles

Sheri Fresonke Harper May 29, 2013 at 7:08 PM Excellent whimsical poem Linda, you make me wish to go along. Shadow Hamilton May 30, 2013 at 4:30 AM hi Sheri it would be so wonderful to actually see yet alone ride one. My favourite mythical animal. Appreciate your comments Linda

Skat A May 25, 2013 at 7:37 PM beautiful~ SKAT ~ Shadow Hamilton May 25, 2013 at 8:08 PM Appreciated ty Linda

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2013 at 7:49 AM Good morning Linda, my first poem of the day... and it's about the unicorns i love so much... how i wish i could ride one.. May be i have in a lost dream... this has been an exciting poem to read... and back to the skies that light up the sky at night... adding this poem to my favorite list.... Linda Shadow Hamilton May 23, 2013 at 4:42 AM hi Linda I always think there's just a veil that stops us from seeing them. glad you like it Linda Rachel St.Cross May 22, 2013 at 7:06 PM ..........................."OR MAYBE IT'S JUST YOU BABY, THAT MAKES ME SOOO HORNY ? MY LOVE, FOREVER, RACHEL *