Premiere Contest WinnerFantastic Flora Masquerade

Creeping creepy creepers, the crawling trellis
jutting out of everywhere
snaking through country and metropolis
twisting turning in floral bliss
but more like snakes that hiss
But in quietude feign death for self-defense! 

Weeping willows with an unreal surreal sorrow
weeping tears of dew onto the silted furrow.
Perhaps weeping for bretheren felled
in deforestations and land clearings in
my imaginations of the call to preservation.
Against ethnic cleansing of greenery for selfish building
As per man's construction for mere recreation

Velvety-green tear- stained faces or rather foliage
When dew is stuck on them as nature's trinkets of pearls.

And over there touch-me-nots swaying coyly
like prim and proper maidens
in the fantastic floral gardens.

And what in the world is this case? 
Imitation flowery in place of imitation jewellery? 
Yeah, thats poinsettia in a vase
Leaves in the disguise of flowers
Its actual flowers relegated to backstage.

And ethereal fairy-slippers await their never coming wearers
and Indian pipes to be admired by Red Indian sightseers.


Oh and here's another spectacle- but sniper tactics this time
Yikes! Let the naive insect world beware! 
Whilst the bloodthirsty killers lie in ambush
Those camouflaged jungle guerrillas
or should we say the venus fly-traps! 

Or a more harmless one yet mimicking the scary
A snap-dragon flora, its mouth opening and snapping shut.

Then watch that mega-sized jumbo giant flora
The world's largest flower
No stems, no leaves, plant-eater plant, rafflesia.
Is it too much for the faint-hearted ha ha.

And wow now watch that incredible costume, oh my! 
A flower masked as some pesky fly! 
None other than the remarkable fly orchid.

And yet another, the silent music of the fiddlenecks
Fiddles as if for the light-weight fairies.

And lastly not forgetting ofcourse
the sky-blue unforgettable forget-me-nots
A memorable bouquet but themselves devoid of memory.

Ah nature lover poets if you wish to view
more of flora in a fancy dress masquerade
Go ahead and flip through the pages of
a botanical, floral
horticultural
pictorial journal.
And see for yourself the fantastic flora's charade
or else imagine them dressed as a floral renegade!
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Ashley Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 7:45 PM
This poem is absolutely brilliant, Zaynab. Every line is a gem - gem upon gem - till we have a treasure chest filled with the beauty of your piece. I was enthralled with the enchanting artistry and spirit of this fantastic masterwork. I see congrats are in order for your superb trophy win and for garnering well-deserved POTD honors.. A very worthy fav, as well, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Kamoonpuri Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 12:53 AM
Aw not as brilliant as yours, but warmest thanks for your kind sweet acknowledgement of my poetry win .
Hossam  Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 10:46 AM
awesome
Hossam  Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 10:46 AM
awesome
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 5:02 AM
Congrats for the win with this exquisite poem which says all.:)
Breedt Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Hi Zaynab, well here I am and I see you have a huge following. The gold cup was the attraction but the surprise was its in similar vein to my poem too! Congratulations then. I will read some more
Lindley Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Nature too has its killers, and not just man. Yet Nature's beauty far surpasses any of its negatives. Superb poetry my friend... A fav...
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Wow! Profound. congrats> . Thanks for contacting me..you are great!
Salehi Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 1:19 PM
Beautiful.... Congratulations...
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:37 PM
Congrats on your win. Well done.
Daniel Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Many congrats on your win with this beauty, Zaynab:)
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Thanx soo much for the wishes. Take care.
Roper Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 11:16 PM
Warmest thanx for letting me know. Or I wouldn't have known. Take care.
Canerdy Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 12:02 PM
WOW! This is excellent--personifying nature so colorfully, informative too! Congrats on your well-deserved top win! Janice
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 11:18 PM
Warmest thanx for letting me know. Take care.
Pinet Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 12:34 PM
You go beyond technique and pour your heart into your work and the talent shines out for all to see and admire. Emile.
Sathasivam Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 3:15 AM
Excellent. Great imagination write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Dahlusion Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 3:57 PM
Lovely! ––))
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 10:54 AM
Very informative and well done. Congrats! :)
Callus Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 3:10 PM
Fantastic!...What better word to describe this poem, Zayneb! Your descriptive ability and style together with patches of alliteration and botanic knowledge tempt me to bring forth paint and brushes to compliment your words. Congrats on p.o.t.d. // paul
Daniel Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 1:16 AM
What an amazing poem! I loved your use of rhyme, alliteration and imagery, Zaynab:) congratulations on POTD:)
White Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 4:01 AM
Oh, poem of the day too. Congratulations Richard :)
Sergi Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 2:16 PM
A beautiful poetic trek through the adventure of a horticultural wonderland and spring water River Styx. Great Write and thank you your comment on my friends and frenemies. It is based on several realities.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 10:28 AM
Congrats on POTD, S.zaynab. It really is a splendid poem, full of lush, expressive language. A real gem. L & P ~ always.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 11:11 AM
Thank soo much Freddie for dropping by again, Cheers n best wishes.
Mccall Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 9:55 AM
I Love the imagery you put forth in your poem Zaynab. As it is winter here you brought into a snowy town a beautiful spring time garden thank you for sharing this is a very well written and wonderful poem.
Devonshire Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 8:23 AM
Imitation flowers do not produce the same ooohs and ahhh from those who see them. You described beautifully many of my favorite species in your floral parade. Orchids and forget-me-nots are quite popular here in Florida. A lovely poem, my friend!
Smith Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 6:46 AM
Relieved to know it's in a magazine and not your garden, otherwise it would make for a scary walk. Congratulations for POTD honors...
Kamoonpuri Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Aw thanx for telling me or I had never know. This is my first poem of the day acknowledgement so I'm thrilled. I have had my poem selected and awarded trophies on other sites though so i know I can do poetry fine enough. Cheers.
Sage Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 4:56 AM
I see the pleasance of nature in this poem, well written and so aesthetic. I like your use of words, the ways you wrote about nature's beauty in such a fascinating way. the poem is awesome! nice write Zaynurb
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