Fantastic Delight

Ballistic travels
Collapsing apprehension
Milky Way of light 



written for
Sponsor ^Rick Parise 
Contest Name Haiku Beyond (Nature Only)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Laan Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 10:40 AM
Cecil, wonderful haiku, congratulations on your win.
Poet Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 9:09 AM
Congrats Cecil on your well deserved 3rd place win.Wonderful Haiku---kashinath
Haick Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Congratulations on your deserving 3rd Place win, Cecil! Amazing! Always, Annalise
Guzzi Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 2:33 PM
interesting verse. Conrad's Light & Love
Richards Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Love the line "collapsing apphrehension" wow...that is wonderful!! Congratulations!! A great haiku for this contest!
Mehta Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Rick, cecil
Devonshire Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Wow! This is an awesome interpretation of the photo, Cecil. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations Cecil on your third place win...excellent haiku!! Good to see you in the top three. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 11:54 AM
Congrats Cecil my friend on your third place win in Rick's contest with this superb entry luv.. enjoy the top spot where the air is as rare as your lovely words...
Onclaud Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 7:35 AM
best applause for a stunning piece and big win in the contest, cecil.. huggs!
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 7:18 AM
Congratulations Cecil on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Haiku Beyond". Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 12:26 AM
awesome cecil, love the middle line, good luck in contest. Harry
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March 23, 2011 at 2:38 PM
Hey, this is pretty cool, Cecil. I hope it does well for you. Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 6:15 AM
You have perfectly read the picture with apt interpretation, cecil
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