Fantasies Of Youth

Practiced smiles try to camouflage fear, but false facades can't conceal your pain. And yet, you attempt to hide a tear, quelling questions your heart can't explain. A congenial front, smiles mask the truth, like a clown, wearing a painted face. And dispelling fantasies of youth, fake smiles, increase, anxiety's pace. It's stressful, keeping your mask in place, while loneliness haunts both heart and soul. And having lost, love's impassioned race, indifference is your default goal. The veil of smiles, worn to mask your hurt, dissolves in the tears betrayal brings. And yet, the pain your heart couldn't avert helped sever a puppet's tangled strings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 8:04 PM
I can feel the deep hurt, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend. Emile.
Amadore Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 2:02 PM
I enjoyed your rhyme and rhythm, Emile, as well as your deftly interwoven message. Indeed, many of us hide "a broken puppet's tangled strings" while unsuccessfully trying to avert the "truth."
Pinet Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 2:16 PM
Thanks so much Leo, Your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 8:27 AM
All so descriptive! I think we all hide the pain inside which hits us in the gut! We show our best self, the one we want to be, on the outside. We must deal and untangle the strings, quite often. Nice one, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 10:33 AM
Thanks Kim, I welcome your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 6:41 PM
Wrenching pen! Heart, gut, and metaphor... So well executed. xomo
Pinet Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 10:33 AM
Thanks you Maureen, I welcome your comments and support my friend, Emile.
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