Fantasies of a Nunn

Do not just touch me
because you can
make me sense explosions
when you plant your fingerprints
against my skin
and send little messages 
through my blood rush

make me want to be 
a slave to the sin
that our eyes commit
when they meet
Bless me with your lips
and make me beg for breath
hold me delicately,for my skin
crusts and bruises easily

comfort me with little trails
of your fingers against my back
and await my response
love me not by word 
but feeling,make it seem 
as though your world revolves around me 
but do not let that be so true

whisper sweet nothings to my ear
as we wait on the train to home
make me feel bizzare
in an exciting but calming groove
let me reach out for your hand
and wherever our hands meet
 should pour

make me clumsy
but understand that you
drive me a little too wild
for my own good and that 
i need you in every living way...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Badmus Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 3:45 AM
sensual...nice one. fantasies indeed
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 6:24 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Neo. Love, Carol
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:22 PM
Neo, I am not an expert on this kind of poetry, therefore my critique would be inappropriate. I enjoyed this work, keep writing and congrats on having your work featured by Poetry Soup this week..........S.Ronthorpe
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