Fanstory

Here they comes! here they comes.
every cow mooed...
The ducks and hens 
leaving their drakes and cocks
came screachng to see the flock of those, the tiny little crows.
The king himself from his den, 
came at the screach of the hens.
Mighty and strong stepping out between the crowd, 
Proud and happy of the little feloows, 

Those who shall fly over the meadows
croack! croach! came the frong, to notify those gathered.
The wind was light and the clouds were still..
Mother crocodile wept water called tears..

The pigeons and sparrows
come in pairs to see the future come closer.
The elephants stoodby in lines to trumpet for the little victory..
The cuckoo came by with a little surprise, a souvenier! 

A gift from a far offtree, across whom they may fly, 
pieces of pear to eat along the way..
The littles of crows, 
Brought pride to their race..
By a beautiful take off..
Far far away from the sky, 
the view all those down lookup to them now..
All the animals waved good bye! and split away one by one, 
while among the little said, 'one day we will be the
crows with pride..and one day we will be the ones to see out littles fly..like fan's viewing the sky'.

by 
Manthra
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 12:35 AM
Wonderful write Manthra, kids would sure love this ! Congrats on big win!
Eastman Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 2:34 PM
A delightful end to the tale. Congratulations on the win.
Iyer Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 12:14 PM
Very nice poem Manthra.. congrats.. see you soon as No ONE. Keep it up.. If you are planning to release book, I will be glad to publish the same..
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 9:10 AM
a charming story many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations on your top ten finish.
Hariharan Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 8:26 AM
Thank you very much!
Nance Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 8:02 AM
Fun and imaginative, grats on your win.
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