Debra Squyres Poet Free verse

Fanned Dream Sand

 Boundless, the possibilities for dreamers;
Interval visions for believers
freeing time of structured sand,
sifting through clock’s hands,
allowing
fanned
imaging’s
unfettering strands
to now literally expand
sieving pictures through dreamtime’s siever.
Boundless, the possibilities for dreamers.

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2/15/15 

I’d name this form:  Etheree Hourglass 

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Skat A February 27, 2015 at 10:59 PM Debra, nice win. SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 24, 2015 at 12:39 AM Superb write Debra! Congrats on big win!

Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 8:02 AM Congratulations!

Casarah Nance February 23, 2015 at 7:39 AM Well done. Grats on your win!

Jan Allison February 23, 2015 at 2:01 AM dropping back with my congrats Debra:-) Hugs jan xx So glad you got it centered in the end:-) xx

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2015 at 12:25 AM This is a very classy write, Debra! it only got put a bit lower on my list for wrong syllable count with the line using the word 'literally." Very creative vision of time! Congrats on your win. Debra Squyres February 23, 2015 at 2:18 PM I must have missed that line in the syllable counter you suggested.

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2015 at 12:25 AM I liked your name for my form too, dearie!!

Robert Johnson February 16, 2015 at 10:40 AM Like the sands through the hour glass. So are the days of our lives. :):):):)

Dorian Petersen Potter February 16, 2015 at 5:06 AM Very nice pen, Debra ! I really enjoyed your piece, dear friend! Enjoyed it! A 7 from me!I wish you a very nice day! In his light! God bless you! :) xxx D"

Jan Allison February 15, 2015 at 4:40 PM soup mail :-) xx

Jan Allison February 15, 2015 at 4:09 PM Beautifully penned good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Debra Squyres February 15, 2015 at 4:10 PM Thank you... I can't get it to center on the page !!! Don't have a clue what I'm doing wrong... ughhh !!

Debra Squyres February 15, 2015 at 4:00 PM I couldn't get it to center... ughhh... It does look like an hourglass when centered.