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Faniciful Falacies

With the world spinning deeper Come to a resting point On a mossy rock pile Lounging in a river stream Sickly coughs cover staggering breaths Willow shadowed waves break on splintered souls Reassembled For a purpose unknown The precautious pursuit First appreciated When the whirlpool world Spun deeper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/21/2011 10:52:00 AM
I love the whirlpool world concept..
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