Faniciful Falacies

With the world spinning deeper
Come to a resting point
On a mossy rock pile
Lounging in a river stream

Sickly coughs cover staggering breaths
Willow shadowed waves break on splintered souls
Reassembled 
For a purpose unknown

The precautious pursuit
First appreciated
When the whirlpool world
Spun deeper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 21, 2011 at 10:52 AM
I love the whirlpool world concept..
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