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Fancy Men

hostility snaps the nerves taut from life in tiny boxes your neighbor prances naked through the hall and brags about her fancy men attracted to her beautiful, black body they pay her rent her groceries everything she needs she tramples them orders them to hand over their wallets they do while she sinks into her coffin of dependence on handouts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/13/2012 9:21:00 AM
Love this xx
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Date: 8/3/2011 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Madeleine. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2011 2:57:00 AM
Nothing to brag about,ill earnings or being kept by immoral means,dignity springs to mind, you got that then leave her crack on, you seem to have your morals ..Thank you your commenting on my poem " FATE, FINAL PIECE IN THE JIGSAW "Always encouraging on positive feedback .. Blessings Paul
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Madeleine. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2011 6:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Madeleine
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Date: 5/29/2011 9:03:00 PM
madeleine,... congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. enjoyed stopping by,..p.d.
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:28:00 AM
Wow!! Very nice poem...Jimmy
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Date: 3/30/2011 5:32:00 PM
Creative and interesting write, Madeleine
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