Fanatics

FANATICS Five funny little animals sitting on a thin log Although they all sat staring at a hog Nothing seemed to bother them at all Another one is hiding neath the floor stall Ticklers they might not be for anyone to see Ideally you’ll never see all of us together and be Can’t you not see we only want to be set free? Seeing us all sitting underneath the tree of a log. Written: Sept. 9, 2015 Theresa Marie Hummingbird

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Funom Makama

Date: 10/30/2015 6:58:00 AM

This is lovely and great! I miss your work my dear poet. Refreshing... so refreshing!!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/6/2015 4:06:00 PM

Cute acrostic. I seems you have a soft spot for animals. Why not? They do what they do without greed. They just try to be.

Theresa Cw
Date: 9/9/2015 4:06:00 AM

Thank you so very much Duke for your beauty of a comment, and yes I really do love animals you treat them right and they will love you and never hurt their companion whom feeds them every day without humans ill-fated greed as you said...