Fanatics

FANATICS

Five funny little animals sitting on a thin log
Although they all sat staring at a hog
Nothing seemed to bother them at all
Another one is hiding neath the floor stall
Ticklers they might not be for anyone to see
Ideally you’ll never see all of us together and be
Can’t you not see we only want to be set free?
Seeing us all sitting underneath the tree of a log.



Written: Sept. 9, 2015
Theresa Marie Hummingbird
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 6:58 AM
This is lovely and great! I miss your work my dear poet. Refreshing... so refreshing!!
Beaufort Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 4:06 PM
Cute acrostic. I seems you have a soft spot for animals. Why not? They do what they do without greed. They just try to be.
Cw Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 4:06 AM
Thank you so very much Duke for your beauty of a comment, and yes I really do love animals you treat them right and they will love you and never hurt their companion whom feeds them every day without humans ill-fated greed as you said...
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