Famous Last Words

Who knows what prompts the decision 
To go to war in a boys head
Patriotic or just silly
Now, is the worst case to dread

Hands up, he's caught remembering
Not so far back, to his childhood
Surprised the stove gave him a burn 
Even though mama said it would

Then the thought popped in his head
Perhaps by one on higher
How dangerous it must of been
Back in the days of open fire!

As he fell, it billowed up
That acrid gunpowder cloud
With bullets caught, his last thought,
"Did I say that out loud?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:00 AM
Good write! Stirring. I like it. xomo!
Adams Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 3:11 PM
Thanks Maureen! My muse has been on vacation for a while. I was about to check the obits!!
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