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Original Poem - Dreams Still Grow Once I felt the warmth of balmy spring... breathed deep the scent of blossoms, fresh and pure... I thrilled to sounds of songbirds in the air, while sprouting blades of tender grass appeared. Upon the dew, my seeds of hope were cast... and dreams grew in the magic fling of spring. Then later came the cold of winter's snow... the scent of blossoms turned to musty dust. Chant of restless wind soon filled my ears... green tender grass, long grown, had gone to seed. Still hopes lay buried deep in icy frost... and bright, new dreams emerged to grow in snow. Posted: 09/01/2015 for contest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ New Poem - Dreams Have Grown And bright, new dreams emerged to grow in snow, for winter days are numbers on a page. If body bends and mind is still aglow, no reason to lay dormant neath the frost. New hours, new days, new months to fulfill dreams; continue on, each one a precious gift. And winter is no time to dwell on death, when life still sparks in every newborn morn. So much to see, so much to do until the time has come to know when done is done. My hopes seemed buried deep in icy frost, but bright new dreams have thrived in winter snow. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: Famous Last Line Sponsor: Laura Loo Judged: 03/17/2016 Rules: Looking for a new poem, with the starting line being the last line from a previous contest entry. The poem you choose does not have to be a winning poem, just any poem entered.

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Date: 3/20/2016 11:50:00 PM
Hi Sandra, I meant LINDA, not Lina. LOL... PD
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Date: 3/20/2016 11:42:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your awesome "Famous last line win." ~LINA~
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Date: 3/18/2016 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations, Sandra, on Laura’s Famous Last Line Contest win! Hug Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/20/2016 11:37:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/17/2016 11:27:00 PM
this is my favorite poem so far I am reading from top to bottom and top is where I would have put yours. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2016 8:52:00 AM
I am so honored, Joyce, that you really enjoyed my poem. Thank you so much for your kind words of support and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/17/2016 11:04:00 PM
Great Congrats for great poem to win. Anisha D
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anisha, for your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/17/2016 8:11:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Myself, i am in my Autumn years, actually looking forward to my winter years to come. I Loved both these poems Sandra. I like the metaphor and your words are singing gently in the poetic breeze of peace. Your words do touch the heart gently Sandra. I have to give you a seven Sandra for your words are beautiful and i have to fave these writes so i can read them any time i wish to....Vlad.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2016 8:55:00 AM
Thank you once again, Vlad, for your very supportive and complimentary words. I feel honored to receive your high rating and that my poem will be among your favorites. Your visits and comments are much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 3/17/2016 5:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2016 8:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Laura! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/17/2016 11:48:00 AM
Sandra, ahhhh...I love your titles and your words flowed beautifully...thank you for being a part of my contest, congrats on your placement -luloo :)*smiles*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/17/2016 3:09:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura. It was a great contest and I enjoyed my participation, as well as my nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/1/2016 12:46:00 PM
This is so so beautiful, dear Sandra!! Your metaphor is always so lovely!! Hope this does very well in the contest!! :D :D
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/2/2016 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sneha. I appreciate your visits and support very much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/28/2016 1:03:00 PM
Very beautiful, Sandra. Just a wonderful vision of hope for spring. I love to read your poems. Peace my friend:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/28/2016 1:52:00 PM
Honestly Sandra, I saw the metaphors but as I too am aging, I prefer to think of spring. No offense, but to me it is a much more pleasant subject, as my health is a little suspect at this time.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/28/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. I was hoping my metaphors of spring and winter came through as applying them to my life now that I am in my 'winter' years. Sandra

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