Family Tree

FAMILY    TREE

A  storm  was threatening all week
The tree was a warning to see
The wind rocked our tree’s roots weak .
Not our best,   but son’s  favourite tree.

We’d  had a fall-out  about his girlfriend.
Not speaking,  we were anger-split.
But   wind picked up and we had to attend
To the weakness of his favourite.

With ropes and sturdy stakes  we fought
We got our bonds  tied rightly
My boy   climbed up  and pulled them taut
He tied our branches   tightly

From tree to tree,  some to ground.
His father  held the  straining  ropes
While he drove in the stakes around.
Staking everything on slimmest hopes

Furious wind   the night throughout
Tree  a-straining  our ties,  our knot.
Next morning  our  tree’d  fallen out 
From  weakened roots;  but  we had not .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 5:56 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:04 PM
GReat analogy, Sydney, And congratulations on your place in the contest! Luv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 7:02 AM
The family "tree" shaking! What a clever analogy, Sydney. Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 5:06 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Sydney in Thvia's contest. Love, Carol
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December 1, 2010 at 4:13 AM
congradulations on your entry. john
Mehta Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 11:47 PM
Sydeny-Many Congrats for big win in contest.... Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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November 30, 2010 at 7:50 PM
Congrats Sydney on your big win in Thvia's contest with this awesome entry .. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem tonight with luv..
Brown Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 3:02 PM
Exceptional poetry to be reading this Saturday afternoon Sydney. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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October 16, 2010 at 3:50 AM
I can empathise with this lovely piece - beautifully written. Liz
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