Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

Family of My World

My neighbor's colony meshes like
one tree: spirits content as a world 
bows to the giving, the loving, 
the tender yearning of kinship 
near or far. On my lane ,I greet a couple 
next door wrapped under
 an umbrella in the rain... 
that by sending them my light,
 my prayer; I feel a connection 
with everyone illuminating 
unified kindness which bequeaths
days more ethereal 
than sunset’s silent intent.



Mystic Rose's Contest
Who Is Your Neighbor
9/13/2015

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Tammy Reams September 15, 2015 at 6:27 PM Congrats on your win Nette!

Bl Devnath September 15, 2015 at 3:54 PM Congrats on your win my lovely friend. A beautiful pen talked about your beautiful world of universal wholeness beautifully. Loved always,bl

Paul Callus September 15, 2015 at 3:52 PM Your neighbour is quite similar to the one in the bible, Nette....all the people of the world! Very beautifully expressed. I notice that this is a winning contest poem....congratulations:) Hugs // paul

Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 9:55 PM A lovely, flowing write, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich September 14, 2015 at 5:41 PM beautiful, lady! And big congratulations.

Skat A September 14, 2015 at 1:24 PM Nette, Congrats on your, Who Is Your Neighbor win! SKAT

Janice Canerdy September 14, 2015 at 8:43 AM A 7 is not good enough for this magnificent poem! Congratulations on your win. superb use of figurative language Janice

Constance La France September 14, 2015 at 8:29 AM Nette, congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem and I want to thank you so much for my awesome placement in your contest, Poems That Did Not Place and More, I am honored . . .

Jan Allison September 14, 2015 at 7:47 AM Absolutely beautiful Nette many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis September 14, 2015 at 4:44 AM Bow to the excellence of your poetic fervor, dear nette! A seven!

Tim Smith September 13, 2015 at 9:30 PM I really like the way you did this contest nette...good luck Tim

Constance La France September 13, 2015 at 1:09 PM Nette, very nice and perfectly penned and thanks for visiting my poem, father ~~

Jajosh Ongado September 13, 2015 at 12:45 PM I am moved by this all- encompassing poem. Whenever I visit a state for the first time, or go abroad, the comfort of feeling accepted by dwellers make feel I am part of their own world. Isn't that heavenly?

Kp Nunez September 13, 2015 at 12:03 PM Beautiful, Nette. I love your take on this theme...that the term neighbor is not measured by proximity but by connection defined by our humanness. All the best in the contest! huggs!

Emile Pinet September 13, 2015 at 10:22 AM This poem is well written and presents an original viewpoint of a woman experiencing a flood of emotions while pondering a universal spiritual connection to other souls. Emile.

Carly Lalion September 13, 2015 at 9:40 AM This reminds me of the song, 'What A Wonderful World.Your inspiring poem reflects the sense of unity within all our global brothers and sisters.