Family Man

Family Man Loves his wife and children working weekdays sacrificing his needs for theirs, willingly. Repeatedly setting the examples his children watch learning how to grow up © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 17, 2010 Poetic form: Tetractys Dedicated to my son-in-laws and family men everywhere.

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Carrie Richards

Date: 1/17/2010 7:52:00 AM

You have painted the picture of what a father whould be. Well done! ~

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/17/2010 5:13:00 AM

so very clear, concise, effective and exemplary of true love. Great Dane Ann! This must be just what tetracts were made to do.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 1/17/2010 4:15:00 AM

You painted an excellent picture of what a father/husband should be. You must have some wonderful son-in-laws to dedicate this piece to them well done poetress.