Family Man

Family Man

Loves
his wife
and children
working weekdays
sacrificing his needs for theirs, willingly.

Repeatedly setting the examples 
his children watch
learning how
to grow
up

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    January 17, 2010

Poetic form: Tetractys

Dedicated to my son-in-laws and family men everywhere.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Richards Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 7:52 AM
You have painted the picture of what a father whould be. Well done! ~
Dufresne Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 5:13 AM
so very clear, concise, effective and exemplary of true love. Great Dane Ann! This must be just what tetracts were made to do.
Nutter Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 4:15 AM
You painted an excellent picture of what a father/husband should be. You must have some wonderful son-in-laws to dedicate this piece to them well done poetress.
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