Family Love Unfolds

The young and the old are part of man's fold.
Love between them, better than gold…tenfold.
The past before told, as the future shall behold.
Depends upon love shown, not an empty billfold.

Chores hide and seek, anger vanquished…controlled.
Life molds by example as truths are told.
Family meetings upon hope's threshold,
Foster goodness without the need to scold.

Happy days upon sacrifice enrolled.
Profits many blessings; smooths lives potholed.  
Freedom of choice has a responsibility twofold.
Give from the heart; let understanding enfold.

Time writes; family history lives scrolled.
Children grow and soon leave the household.
Memories in heart, that each child shall hold,
Establish free choices in love's leasehold.

Seniors who listen with wisdom bankrolled,
Experiences share…but only when polled.
Respect grows for elders as life is strolled.
Admiration earned; limiting stronghold.

The young, like the old, are part of man’s fold.
Time together grows respect’s freehold.
Helping children make choices…scorn untold.
The smiles that you give will come back ten-fold.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
June 5, 2010
Poetic form: Monorhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 5:16 AM
Really like the last line...What we give will come back to us mulitplied that is for sure..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
Brown Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 4:39 AM
Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Dane Ann. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Wishing you the best in the contest. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol
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