Family Love

I got family by my side
that would never ever die
I wanna find love to end my sorrow
even if that means I will have to borrow
just a little bit of love to end my grief
O please tell me what to do sir priest
The priest said not to worry my son
your family loves you a ton
Just keep your hand up and look around
when ever you feel down just put your knees on the ground
yours hands up high 
and pray to the sky!

Your not alone my son!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 22, 2016 at 10:15 PM
LUIS, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
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March 9, 2010 at 12:17 PM
that is a cool way to describe prayer, I like this. Andrea
Palli Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 11:33 AM
Glad you have your family!
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 6:15 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Luis. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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