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Dusk sweeps the willows While children's wild laughter Scatters the fireflies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/19/2013 5:03:00 PM
Ahhh!! This brings sweet peaceful feelings..Sara
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Katy Fulton
Date: 7/20/2013 10:03:00 AM
I'm glad Sara =)
Date: 7/18/2013 1:15:00 PM
Children's wild laughter scatters the fireflies...I can actually picture this in my head! Beautiful imagery and such a 'happy' use of fireflies! You'll find a poem on Fireflies in my portfolio as well. Hadn't I stumbled on this piece I wouldn't have related fireflies with anything other than misery & sacrifice!
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Date: 7/17/2013 7:41:00 AM
Ahh, the power of Mother Nature & its innocence. Gorgeous.
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Date: 5/23/2010 5:58:00 AM
I can picture the kids playing in your beautiful words Kathryn >> have a wonderful Sunday >> James
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Date: 5/22/2010 5:35:00 PM
so lovely..children and fire flies!
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Date: 5/22/2010 11:45:00 AM
Nice one
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