Family and Friends

Like sunrays at dawn,
Smiles illuminate my world;
I’m thankful for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 8:35 AM
Raul, you made the sun shine for me on a very dreary day with this write. I am now smiling after reading this splendid poem. Thank you. Love, Carol
Goff Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 8:53 AM
thanks Raul! I needed a lift today! this is wonderful, jim
Poddar Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 10:16 AM
Indeed something to be thankful for. Stunning poetry.
Richards Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 4:17 PM
Such a heartwarmer is this wonderful senryu!! Love it!!
Fraser Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 2:16 PM
Beautiful Senryu Raul>>James
Chircop Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 7:30 AM
i love this senryu cos i believe in family and friendship,here on the site i made some good friends too-friends illuminate our world by their loyalty,respect,care,trust--loosing a good friend is loosing family and more for me so thankyou for reminding me to handle my friends with tender loving care--great write Raul---charma
Strand Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 11:53 PM
Great images Raul.Nice poetry.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome blog comments today.
Manibog Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 4:40 PM
simple yet sweet. :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 4:05 PM
It is good that you have someone that you care about so much the daughter that you mentioned I supposel. It is a good Senryu. Sara
Freeman Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 3:12 PM
I was here, I like smiles too. Good thought! Good connection, Sun,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Smiles! Moses I assume a lady here too!
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