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     Unalterable
          loyalty to tradition
               our kindred treasure

     Consoling touches
          from loved one's true tenderness
               my beloved's arms

     Traversing one's life
          a warmth of togetherness
               this most heartfelt peace

     My Family Contest Sponsored by Marvin Celestia  
     05/03/2016

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Date: 8/7/2016 5:21:00 PM
I'm so glad to see this one won. Congratulations, Charlie.
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Date: 8/7/2016 7:16:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 5/19/2016 12:31:00 PM
The love for your family shines through your words, Charlie. Well done and congratulations.
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Date: 5/19/2016 8:24:00 PM
So good to hear from you again. Thank you Lin...
Date: 5/19/2016 10:14:00 AM
This is so beautiful Charlie! There is no disconnection as sometimes happens when writing more than one haiku. This piece flows from one to the next impeccably. I love it and I am faving it! Congratulations on your well deserved second place! #7. ; )
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Date: 5/19/2016 11:34:00 AM
Such kind words Connie, I thank you very much...
Date: 5/19/2016 8:08:00 AM
Hi, Charlie, such a wonderful set of Haikus that images the great and loving qualities of your family. Congratulations on your podium win. 7 Sandra
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Date: 5/19/2016 11:33:00 AM
I so appreciate your encouragement and congratulatory note Sandra, thank you...
Date: 5/19/2016 7:03:00 AM
Hi! email me your full name, birthday and the snap shot of your signature for your price.
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Date: 5/19/2016 6:52:00 AM
Congratz for the win!
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Date: 5/19/2016 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Marvin, I appreciate your consideration and your sponsorship...
Date: 5/6/2016 4:20:00 AM
Beautifully written set of Haiku's, Charlie. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Date: 5/6/2016 6:14:00 AM
So nice of you to visit Teppo, thank you so much for the encouragement...
Date: 5/5/2016 9:43:00 PM
i love how you did your set, Charlie. Should place. If it were in my contest, it certainly would.
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Date: 5/5/2016 9:46:00 PM
You're so kind,thank you Andrea...
Date: 5/5/2016 10:51:00 AM
Beautiful poem in contest my lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/5/2016 12:10:00 PM
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Date: 5/5/2016 10:02:00 AM
Just three Haiku but your words speak volumes, Charlie, of the blessings your share with your family. All the best for the contest. Sandra
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Date: 5/5/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Sandra...
Date: 5/4/2016 7:29:00 AM
Sounds like a nice family. Good Luck with the contest.
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Date: 5/4/2016 10:42:00 AM
Thank you Jeralyn...
Date: 5/4/2016 1:18:00 AM
A lovely write, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/4/2016 5:34:00 AM
Thank you Richard...
Date: 5/3/2016 5:10:00 PM
Your family sounds wonderful, Charlie. Would they consider adopting me? lol
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/3/2016 7:02:00 PM
Come on home my dear, the key is under the mat...