Charlie Smith Poet Haiku

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Family

Unalterable
          loyalty to tradition
               our kindred treasure

     Consoling touches
          from loved one's true tenderness
               my beloved's arms

     Traversing one's life
          a warmth of togetherness
               this most heartfelt peace

     My Family Contest Sponsored by Marvin Celestia  
     05/03/2016

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Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2016 at 5:21 PM I'm so glad to see this one won. Congratulations, Charlie. Charlie Smith August 7, 2016 at 7:16 PM Thank you Andrea...

Lin Lane May 19, 2016 at 12:31 PM The love for your family shines through your words, Charlie. Well done and congratulations. Charlie Smith May 19, 2016 at 8:24 PM So good to hear from you again. Thank you Lin...

Connie Marcum Wong May 19, 2016 at 10:14 AM This is so beautiful Charlie! There is no disconnection as sometimes happens when writing more than one haiku. This piece flows from one to the next impeccably. I love it and I am faving it! Congratulations on your well deserved second place! #7. ; ) Charlie Smith May 19, 2016 at 11:34 AM Such kind words Connie, I thank you very much...

Sandra Haight May 19, 2016 at 8:08 AM Hi, Charlie, such a wonderful set of Haikus that images the great and loving qualities of your family. Congratulations on your podium win. 7 Sandra Charlie Smith May 19, 2016 at 11:33 AM I so appreciate your encouragement and congratulatory note Sandra, thank you...

Marvin G. Celestial May 19, 2016 at 7:03 AM Hi! email me your full name, birthday and the snap shot of your signature for your price.

Marvin G. Celestial May 19, 2016 at 6:52 AM Congratz for the win! Charlie Smith May 19, 2016 at 11:30 AM Thank you Marvin, I appreciate your consideration and your sponsorship...

Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2016 at 9:43 PM i love how you did your set, Charlie. Should place. If it were in my contest, it certainly would. Charlie Smith May 5, 2016 at 9:46 PM You're so kind,thank you Andrea...

Bl Devnath May 5, 2016 at 10:51 AM Beautiful poem in contest my lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always, bl Charlie Smith May 5, 2016 at 12:10 PM Thank you BL...

Sandra Haight May 5, 2016 at 10:02 AM Just three Haiku but your words speak volumes, Charlie, of the blessings your share with your family. All the best for the contest. Sandra Charlie Smith May 5, 2016 at 10:23 AM Thank you Sandra...

Jeralyn Tolliver May 4, 2016 at 7:29 AM Sounds like a nice family. Good Luck with the contest. Charlie Smith May 4, 2016 at 10:42 AM Thank you Jeralyn...

Richard Lamoureux May 4, 2016 at 1:18 AM A lovely write, good luck in the contest. Charlie Smith May 4, 2016 at 5:34 AM Thank you Richard...

Lin Lane May 3, 2016 at 5:10 PM Your family sounds wonderful, Charlie. Would they consider adopting me? lol Charlie Smith May 3, 2016 at 7:02 PM Come on home my dear, the key is under the mat...