Family

Familiarity carved on a strong sense of belonging And around similar interests, religiously protected More powerful than the influence of the DNA In all situations, such identity still stands strong Love serving as the remarkable evidence, staying Young even while the relationship ages

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/29/2015 4:01:00 PM

Such a powerful Acrostic about family, Funom. Your words image the underlying emotional bonds that hold families together like glue. 7, Sandra

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Sandra

Peter Dome

Date: 5/29/2015 12:58:00 PM

Wow this is some acrostic. if only all families were like this. I think this is an incredible write you really say it well. love it well done best wishes. Pete. 7

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so much Dome

Skat A

Date: 5/28/2015 1:42:00 PM

cool poem

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so much SKAT A