Family

With my family,
Distant from where I am now.
I wish I was there,
I would love to see them all
But I cannot go right now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 2:48 PM
Very wery good Dlizabeth i loved it..............................Danielle
Esquire Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 5:06 PM
Dear Elizabeth, This is a beautiful Tanka YOU should call and make plans Even a voice of a LOVED one brings YOU together LOVE YOU... HG
Winter Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 12:15 PM
It's so difficult to be away from family. Close in spirit, no doubt. Heartfelt and beautiful write. Hope you get to see them soon. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 6:06 AM
Elizabeth - I miss my family to hon - And I'm rowing the same boat - God Bless, MJ
Ehigiator Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 4:29 PM
Good write, I know what it is like to be missing your loved ones.. Hope you will see them soon.. Take care and God Bless *Tyesha
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