Family

For me a lofty rooted tree

Always showering oceans of glee

Most gracious blessings pouring on me

I gratefully to God make a plea

Leading a joyful life with my family

Yearning for perpetual presence in the world of me.


October 31st, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/21/2018 7:59:00 AM
I like this form when it is done well like you have here. Hugs Rick.
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/22/2018 12:59:00 PM
Elating and rewarding is your generous and heartfelt feedback! An appreciation coming from you is honourable and uplifting! Thank you so much Richard. Stay blessed always.
Date: 5/3/2018 2:25:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Besma ... much love in your family - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/3/2018 4:40:00 PM
My pleasure dear Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for you lovely and genuine feedback. My regards.
Date: 5/2/2018 2:31:00 AM
In Acrostic Poetic Form you have mirrored my sentiments on "Family" so accurately. Wonderful write my friend.....Maria xxx
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/2/2018 3:09:00 AM
I'm glad we share and enjoy one of the beauties and blessings of life! Elated by your gracious visit dear Maria. Stay shining with glee.
Date: 5/1/2018 3:10:00 PM
Such good feeling of family love in your words Besma..May this be perpetual..everlasting!
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/1/2018 4:37:00 PM
A great joy and honour you bestow on me! Thank you so much for your generosity Vijay.
Date: 5/1/2018 2:07:00 PM
Wonderful Acrostic poem, dear Besma. Sounds like you are truly blessed. Sincerely, Elaine George
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/1/2018 4:31:00 PM
So much humbled by your elating praise dear Elaine, thank you a bunch.
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