Family

For me a lofty rooted tree

Always showering oceans of glee

Most gracious blessings pouring on me

I gratefully to God make a plea

Leading a joyful life with my family

Yearning for perpetual presence in the world of me.


October 31st, 2016
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Lamoureux Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:59 AM
I like this form when it is done well like you have here. Hugs Rick.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 12:59 PM
Elating and rewarding is your generous and heartfelt feedback! An appreciation coming from you is honourable and uplifting! Thank you so much Richard. Stay blessed always.
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 2:25 PM
- A beautiful poem, Besma ... much love in your family - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 4:40 PM
My pleasure dear Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for you lovely and genuine feedback. My regards.
Williams Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:31 AM
In Acrostic Poetic Form you have mirrored my sentiments on "Family" so accurately. Wonderful write my friend.....Maria xxx
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 3:09 AM
I'm glad we share and enjoy one of the beauties and blessings of life! Elated by your gracious visit dear Maria. Stay shining with glee.
Pandit Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Such good feeling of family love in your words Besma..May this be perpetual..everlasting!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:37 PM
A great joy and honour you bestow on me! Thank you so much for your generosity Vijay.
George   Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Wonderful Acrostic poem, dear Besma. Sounds like you are truly blessed. Sincerely, Elaine George
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:31 PM
So much humbled by your elating praise dear Elaine, thank you a bunch.
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