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Family

For me a lofty rooted tree Always showering oceans of glee Most gracious blessings pouring on me I gratefully to God make a plea Leading a joyful life with my family Yearning for perpetual presence in the world of me. October 31st, 2016

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/21/2018 7:59:00 AM

I like this form when it is done well like you have here. Hugs Rick.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/22/2018 12:59:00 PM

Elating and rewarding is your generous and heartfelt feedback! An appreciation coming from you is honourable and uplifting! Thank you so much Richard. Stay blessed always.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/3/2018 2:25:00 PM

- A beautiful poem, Besma ... much love in your family - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/3/2018 4:40:00 PM

My pleasure dear Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for you lovely and genuine feedback. My regards.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/2/2018 2:31:00 AM

In Acrostic Poetic Form you have mirrored my sentiments on "Family" so accurately. Wonderful write my friend.....Maria xxx

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/2/2018 3:09:00 AM

I'm glad we share and enjoy one of the beauties and blessings of life! Elated by your gracious visit dear Maria. Stay shining with glee.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/1/2018 3:10:00 PM

Such good feeling of family love in your words Besma..May this be perpetual..everlasting!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/1/2018 4:37:00 PM

A great joy and honour you bestow on me! Thank you so much for your generosity Vijay.

Elaine George

Date: 5/1/2018 2:07:00 PM

Wonderful Acrostic poem, dear Besma. Sounds like you are truly blessed. Sincerely, Elaine George

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/1/2018 4:31:00 PM

So much humbled by your elating praise dear Elaine, thank you a bunch.