False Sun

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first loves false flame burned way too hot and left me nothing but the want for fiery passion to remain to keep me bound in love's pleasure-pain like chasing an addiction high more, ever more to reach the sky I find that I am in a cage I have lost this ancient war you waged so injured, I then licked my wounds to passions heat I am immune all warmth leaked out with your goodbye too frozen to fall, the tears I cry I can still feel that dizzy spin the world revolved around you then I feel so lost all just a blur I did not see the black hole you were yes, my whole world revolved ‘round you you weren't the sun that much is true I guess I had my eyes shut tight and did not see your dark heart of night the warmth i felt upon my face was not the sun but my disgrace thank God your gone and He forgives and true love, so warm, inside me lives

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