False Lover

He turned away at end of day
From his promise to wed.
With loathsome smile, nothing but vile,
Denied what he had said.
“I’ll return home, from which I roam,
To wife who waits for me.
You should forget we ever met,
I’ll not your future be.”
I sadly cried, said he had lied,
He patted my bent back.
 “Oh little one, it has been fun.
But you’re getting the sack.”
Feeling so bad, I called my dad,
Told him my love had lied.
He came so fast with gun to blast 
The one for whom I’d sighed.
In steady voice, said, “You’ve a choice
You’ll either run or die.
No man does live, whom I’ll forgive
For making my girl cry”.

I beg young miss, take heed from this
And do not give your trust
To him who’d bed before you’re wed.
That wedding ring’s a must.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 1:33 PM
Joyce congrats on your well deserve win. Connie
Zerbst Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 9:09 PM
Good job on this one Joyce! Enjoyed reading. Congrats.
Ryerson Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 6:52 PM
Oh my, Joyce...so beautifully done and I'm in dreadful and deathly fear of your Daddy's gun!... Congrats on your win in this challanging and difficult contest - Tim
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 6:04 PM
this is REALLY good, JOyce. I don't quite recall the rules of this contest but I know I didn't do it because it scared me! Kudos to you and congrats.
Guzzi Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 2:01 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 7:37 AM
Congrats on your win. Well deserved. Connie
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 1:45 AM
Hi congratulations once more Joyce, another well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
Dillard Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 8:36 PM
I loved it! And, as a father who raised a daughter, I can support your message! Or at least resemble it! HA! But, a younger heart that once beat within my chest may have disagreed!! RAY
A   Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 8:30 PM
Love your winning poem Joyce...pd
Jerden Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 7:33 PM
Nice job, Joyce. Congratulations! Sounds like some dads I knew back in the day!
Fisher Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 6:44 PM
This is so smoothly said with wisdom that is likely to be ignored. I enjoyed the story.
Bauer Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 2:32 PM
wonderful poem, joyce! i don't know if i agree with your message at the end, but i love the way you've written it...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 7:10 AM
Oh Joyce i don't know if to laugh or cry because it has strong elements of anguish and comedy. That last four lines are a doozy, just love this xx
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