False Hope

She said no
Showing maybe hope
Of one chance
That could be
But there was just nothing there
Vibes false hope

Russell Sivey

Form – Shadorma -- 3/5/3/3/7/5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sweetheart Avatar
September 14, 2011 at 5:21 PM
false hope is like a mask of illusion Russell.. used nicely with this Shadorma form featured by Nette luv..
Johnson Avatar
September 14, 2011 at 2:09 AM
yes met them teasers, maybe time, maybe not, yes please, sorry but id rather not, just said that she's a tease... next time gadget:)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace