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FALSE HERO

. H ATE / / / / YO UCAN SHOOT INTO YOUR VEIN S / / / {HEROINE IS NO HERO}

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/21/2016 10:04:00 AM
lol,,, wow... WOW...awesome and the best shape... skat
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Date: 5/14/2009 1:04:00 PM
Dear Jade,Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Honorable Mention in Deborah's "Wickedness" Contest Al LWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:42:00 AM
Jade, I really love this one. Nice shape poem and tremendous message. I think you should try to sell this poem to some anti-drug organizations and make money on it. Or at least do a LOT of good. Imagination perfected! Congratulations. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/14/2009 6:35:00 AM
Wow! So much truth in this one and definately wicked. Well done, love the format. Congratulations on your HM. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/13/2009 6:57:00 PM
Congrats on your HM Jade...Raul
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Date: 5/13/2009 4:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win in Debbie's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/28/2009 11:58:00 AM
ok i see it. a needle. jhl
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Date: 4/22/2009 8:30:00 PM
Title misspelled. Should be "False." No 'u.' Sorry, it's the proofreader in me.
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Date: 4/22/2009 12:34:00 PM
Nice message, I think you meant False in the title, great work...Raul
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Date: 4/22/2009 12:29:00 PM
Such creativity with a good message. Well done.
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Date: 4/22/2009 12:20:00 PM
good job and its original
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Date: 4/22/2009 12:19:00 PM
really cool poem jade.
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