False Hero

. H ATE / / / / YO UCAN SHOOT INTO YOUR VEIN S / / / {HEROINE IS NO HERO}

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Skat A

Date: 5/21/2016 10:04:00 AM

lol,,, wow... WOW...awesome and the best shape... skat

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/14/2009 1:04:00 PM

Dear Jade,Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Honorable Mention in Deborah's "Wickedness" Contest Al LWAYS...HG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/14/2009 10:42:00 AM

Jade, I really love this one. Nice shape poem and tremendous message. I think you should try to sell this poem to some anti-drug organizations and make money on it. Or at least do a LOT of good. Imagination perfected! Congratulations. Love, Dane

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/14/2009 6:35:00 AM

Wow! So much truth in this one and definately wicked. Well done, love the format. Congratulations on your HM. Smiles from Lolita

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/13/2009 6:57:00 PM

Congrats on your HM Jade...Raul

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/13/2009 4:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win in Debbie's contest! Love, Shar

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/28/2009 11:58:00 AM

ok i see it. a needle. jhl

Danielle White

Date: 4/22/2009 8:30:00 PM

Title misspelled. Should be "False." No 'u.' Sorry, it's the proofreader in me.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/22/2009 12:34:00 PM

Nice message, I think you meant False in the title, great work...Raul

Anthony Nutter

Date: 4/22/2009 12:29:00 PM

Such creativity with a good message. Well done.

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 4/22/2009 12:20:00 PM

good job and its original

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 4/22/2009 12:19:00 PM

really cool poem jade.