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False Face Ghastly Garb

false face ghastly garb
bellows boos by porch light halo....
no fruit or mints please

childhoodholidaypeoplehaiku

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Skat A

December 21, 2015 at 4:19 PM

:) merry Christmas

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 29, 2010 at 4:20 AM

Congratulations on your win Gerard in Irma's "Halloween Costume Contest". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 26, 2010 at 3:16 PM

Congrats Gerard on your big win in Irma's cool contest with this rare beauty entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory with luv.. hope my boys in blue don't disappoint this week... sad to see more than half the season is gone already luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 26, 2010 at 1:48 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, gerard

Sheri Fresonke Harper

November 26, 2010 at 1:47 PM

lol, love the twisted end line, enjoyed it, congrats on your win:)

James Fraser

November 26, 2010 at 10:51 AM

Many congratulations on your win in SKAT's fine contest Gerard, nice one >> James

Skat A

November 25, 2010 at 10:37 PM

GERARD, CONGRATULATIONA! and Sorry for judging my contest late. Once again I love the taste of my # 1-10 placements. Enjoyed the thought and smiles. Thanks so much for my contest entry, have your self a wonderful & bessed holiday~luv* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

November 13, 2010 at 1:51 AM

sounds bad,, still enjoyed,.. *p.s.* I posted a poem dedication, hope you can spy your name in there. (IT IS IN THERE)Thanks for all your comments always p.d.

John Loving Iii

October 26, 2010 at 4:01 AM

sounds like your going to do it yourself without the kids. john

October 22, 2010 at 7:11 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. I think many kids would probably agree with your last line. Nice use of alliteration and imagery. Keep on writing. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

October 7, 2010 at 11:18 PM

hahaha , I'm with THAT. no fruits, mints OR gum!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 7, 2010 at 10:28 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Gerard. May your days always be filled with good health, love beyond expectation, and an overload of inspiration. Thank you so much for your always kind comments my friend. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

October 6, 2010 at 4:19 PM

Very nice use of alliteration with good images Gerard

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