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False Alarm

shrill siren eye rolls 
           no one heeds
      the car who cries wolf

      (Lune) 5-3-5 Syllables

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2014

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July 8, 2014 at 9:35 PM

Congrats on your win!!!!

Poet Destroyer A

June 8, 2014 at 8:00 PM

nice win David...XOX...Linda

June 8, 2014 at 7:57 AM

HI DAVID,, :) Enjoyed the 3 lines. Congrats on the win. Love ~SKAT~

June 2, 2014 at 7:23 PM

Okay I admit, I over thinked it, I was reading shrill siren, like a monsterous beast, then I didn't get where the car who cries wolf. then I realized you were talking about a car alarm and how people ignore the sound of it. Much applause, Your words played a vivid game, Well done on your win David :)

June 2, 2014 at 8:04 AM

Congrats on the win!!!!1

Shadow Hamilton

June 2, 2014 at 6:36 AM

hi Dave fine poem congrats on win hugs

Mark J. Halliday

June 2, 2014 at 12:29 AM

Nicely done. Interesting anthromorphism. Happy to share the #1 spot with you.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 1, 2014 at 4:01 PM

mmmn witty write.. :D KUDOS!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

June 1, 2014 at 11:13 AM

Great write David n a deserved huge win ! Congrats!

June 1, 2014 at 1:42 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Debbie's contest, david

Andrea Dietrich

May 31, 2014 at 11:17 PM

hey, this is cute and clever. Congrats on your great win.

May 31, 2014 at 8:26 PM

Congratulations. love,.Joyce

May 28, 2014 at 7:54 AM

well worded and descriptive.. lovely imagery, david.. huggs

May 28, 2014 at 3:26 PM

Thank you Nette...I value your comments

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

May 25, 2014 at 11:02 AM

Enjoyed

May 25, 2014 at 1:12 PM

Thanks Muhammad...appreciate you stopping by

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