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Fall's Parade

Autumn leaves marching In the breeze to fall's parade Winter stands waiting

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2010 12:06:00 AM

I really like this one, that last line makes it very haiku-ish for me!

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/18/2010 6:20:00 PM

A wonderful Haiku, I especially love the last line, "Winter stands waiting". Caryl

Marie Harrison

Date: 6/18/2010 2:55:00 PM

Beautiful haiku!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/18/2010 2:14:00 PM

Great job, Larry. I don't really get Haiku but that's my problem. Rgds .. Ralph

James Fraser

Date: 6/18/2010 1:15:00 PM

The seasons give us so much to write about Larry, you have captured the fall with delight than decay. Thank you so much for your kind comments >> James

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/18/2010 12:11:00 PM

Lovely haiku in anticipation of winter ~ Sharon :)

Gavin Pattison

Date: 6/18/2010 10:09:00 AM

Good job on this. Gavin.

Tirzah Conway

Date: 6/18/2010 10:02:00 AM

Love this Haiku, Larry!~Tirzah~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/18/2010 9:51:00 AM

nice Larry, enjoyed the way you bring out fall marching in your haiku of nature. makes me say at the oh! no not witer again. Enjoyed,..Sidney LeeAnn