Fall's Parade

Autumn leaves marching
In the breeze to fall's parade
Winter stands waiting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 12:06 AM
I really like this one, that last line makes it very haiku-ish for me!
Muzzey Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 6:20 PM
A wonderful Haiku, I especially love the last line, "Winter stands waiting". Caryl
Harrison Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 2:55 PM
Beautiful haiku!
Taylor Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 2:14 PM
Great job, Larry. I don't really get Haiku but that's my problem. Rgds .. Ralph
Fraser Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 1:15 PM
The seasons give us so much to write about Larry, you have captured the fall with delight than decay. Thank you so much for your kind comments >> James
Tideswell Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 12:11 PM
Lovely haiku in anticipation of winter ~ Sharon :)
Pattison Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 10:09 AM
Good job on this. Gavin.
Conway Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Love this Haiku, Larry!~Tirzah~
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June 18, 2010 at 9:51 AM
nice Larry, enjoyed the way you bring out fall marching in your haiku of nature. makes me say at the oh! no not witer again. Enjoyed,..Sidney LeeAnn
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