Falls In World Ocean

hanging azure sky
                                       inundated with cumulus
                                          falls in world ocean
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 1:15 PM
BL, LOVE THE FALLING IMAGE... SKAT
Devnath  Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 1:38 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl
Devonshire Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 11:58 AM
The sky's blue color is reflected by the oceans and I've never heard it described more perfectly, BL. Awesome work on your haiku! Love, Carolyn
Devnath  Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 12:25 PM
Many thanks for your beautiful comment and credit. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl
Gifford Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:49 PM
Hello BL, I enjoyed your haiku about the ocean. Very expressive image. Blessings, Darlene
Devnath  Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 12:12 PM
Thanks for your beautiful comment my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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