Fall's Impatient Leaves

the impatient leaves color up our autumn lawns bonfire ready

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Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/12/2018 4:01:00 PM

oh, i miss the days when leaves were allowed to be burned in the fall! what a smell that was! thanks for the memory, caren...

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 9/12/2018 10:57:00 AM

Caren, this very fine haiku says it all about the season of fall. Great job! Many thanks for your kind words re my fall entry in the contest. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/12/2018 12:30:00 PM

Thank you Bob. So far I have made the best friends on Soup!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/12/2018 5:28:00 AM

Bees, going dancing Honey in forest flower No time all to rest

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/12/2018 5:39:00 AM

No time at all, and yet, immense amounts of time, because we are timeless.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/11/2018 10:55:00 PM

Oh I have grown to love the smell of those autumn bonfires!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/12/2018 4:09:00 AM

I have wild women bonfires at my house in the fall, all women, laughing, and hooting, telling ridiculous stories we have all heard a hundred times, still laughing at them in the glow of the bonfire.