Fall's Impatient Leaves

the impatient leaves
color up our autumn lawns
bonfire ready
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bauer Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 4:01 PM
oh, i miss the days when leaves were allowed to be burned in the fall! what a smell that was! thanks for the memory, caren...
Hinshaw Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Caren, this very fine haiku says it all about the season of fall. Great job! Many thanks for your kind words re my fall entry in the contest. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob
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September 12, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Thank you Bob. So far I have made the best friends on Soup!
Bangalee Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 5:28 AM
Bees, going dancing Honey in forest flower No time all to rest
Krutsinger Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 5:39 AM
No time at all, and yet, immense amounts of time, because we are timeless.
Faulkner Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 10:55 PM
Oh I have grown to love the smell of those autumn bonfires!
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September 12, 2018 at 4:09 AM
I have wild women bonfires at my house in the fall, all women, laughing, and hooting, telling ridiculous stories we have all heard a hundred times, still laughing at them in the glow of the bonfire.
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