Fall's Farewell

I listened
It had started
A soft crinkling
Of dry leaves
Pirouetting
Across the field
Leaping into the wind
Spiraling sails
Adrift
On a sea of blue
I bid them
adieu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 5:37 PM
Very lovely, John
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 4:06 AM
absolutely gorgeous imagery and I love the title John:-) hugs Jan xx
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