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Fall's Bench Glows

Cloaked in beige, the park awaits new dusk-time and there again owlets will start to chime, through gentle rain, silence lays all around while leaves russet glide unto Autumn’s ground as maples hide their flesh in lean display where twigs imbed the gangly stems like hay to shred reams of petals, a torn bouquet. Yet a wooden bench glows , scenting deep night As love bestows an oath of fate’s delight; in September’s innate grace, one kiss, two hops enshrining wrapped embrace through clear dewdrops while Fall’s bench cradles woven dreams with finesse, a season of devotion, of stars that bless this fond appeal to grasp eternity into all cycle’s reels, evermore free. ................ Isaiah Zerbst’s Interlocking Rhyme Contest By nette onclaud 1/25/2015
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Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 8:17 PM
ok nette. It's done. you better be here!!
A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:18 AM
Nette This is a sweet lovely win. *Skat LOVE*
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 2:59 AM
A lovely winning poem Nette. Big congrats on your win. Cheers!
A. Sharma Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 4:08 AM
Wonderful imagery nette,, liked this lovely pic of my fav autumn much,, Congrats on huge win!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 9:29 PM
The beauty and romance of the autumn season flows sweetly from your pen, Nette...congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda
Relish Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Congrats Nette on your win... a well described poem... #7... lov , nad!
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 12:10 PM
an enchanting write Nette many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Deschler Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 1:31 AM
Even though the year is nearing it's end, I feel so renewed and revitalized when autumn comes... I loved your rich description of this beautiful season. Very, very nicely written, Nette. This poem is a favorite for me! Good luck in Isaiah's contest!
Sirak Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 8:05 AM
Wow! Fabulous! As usual I am in awe of your imagery and phrasing.
Pinet Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 1:48 PM
The words are beauty in themselves and in context speak volumes on the mind set, hopes, admissions and views of the author. Well done. Emile #7
Poet Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 9:59 PM
Beautiful!!!
Kiser Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 4:41 PM
A memorable poem, indeed; I have to give it a '7'.
Peranteau Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Not that this is not a rhyme dear poet, it certainly is, yet....the words flow so gracefully, it is hard to notice the ryhme ! Wonderful pleasure to read you again Nette ! Have a blessed week my friend.....much love, jame
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 2:17 PM
Reads like a inner to me.This contest was true challenge but you seemed to do well with ease. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 1:43 PM
- Really romantic and beautiful poem Nette ( a gigantic : 7 ) - I wish you luck in the contest .... and a lovely day !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Emmons Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Oh you have punctuated my favorite time of year. Fantastic write, I enjoyed this greatly
Onna Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Goodness, this gives Autumn and its benches a dreamy feel, even with the enjambment! And the internal rhymes just give this brilliant poem a great pace, Nette.
Datu Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 11:41 AM
You held me at Line 1 and I didn't stop being enthused by your images. This reminds me of a bench where my celebration of first love bloomed. A most excellent and highly romantic piece of poetry, Nette
Dhaou Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 10:41 AM
An enchanting piece Nette Onclaud ! Enriched with a sublime repertory of words to convey an insightful message ! I really rejoiced
Meade Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 9:25 AM
Park Love -- a beautiful write -- I love trees especially maples . . . your poem is an invitation to come, sit upon my bench and immerse yourself in the spirit of this special sanctuary! Love it! 7
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