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Fall's Allegiance

Autumn leaves dance in the wind As its breath awakens the trees The limbs tremble in defiance As they try to resist the breeze The trees shiver in the cool morning air As the dew gives way to the frost They know their armor will soon be gone For all of their leaves will be lost Winter stands ready to enter the stage And for Autumn to relinquish its hold It's time for Winter to abandon its slumber And Autumn must welcome the cold Winter demands Fall's allegiance Like a General shouting commands Autumn must follow its orders For the time of change is at hand Winter's cold winds show restraint As Autumn surrenders in shame The trees bow down in silence With Winter's persistence to blame Winter takes it's rightful place Til Spring revenges Fall's death But Winter will battle until the end Til it breathes its final breath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/25/2010 3:41:00 PM
I'm outta breath reading it- just kidding- a very inventive write Larry- Congrats
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Date: 5/23/2010 6:55:00 PM
Congrats Larry on your win in Paula's contest with this awesome write ..enjoy another great win...with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/22/2010 11:27:00 PM
a good seasonal poem, Larry, with lots of personification going on! Congrats on your HM. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/22/2010 9:18:00 AM
This is an absolutely terrific poem. Great rhyme, wonderful rythym, nice meter. Very well written and easy to read. Nice job. Joe
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Date: 5/20/2010 7:29:00 PM
Changing seasons well described. Nice job, Larry
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