Kim Rodrigues Poet Enclosed Rhyme

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Falls

FALLS

Lugubrious countenance of midnight.
Scream of water cutting the inner ear.
At edge of Anna Ruby, gripped by fear,
Night-wanderer awakes to stormy height.

8/7/2020
Be Inspired Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Regina McIntosh

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John Watt August 10, 2020 at 2:10 PM So creative and evocative, Kim! Best wishes in the contest ~ John Kim Rodrigues August 10, 2020 at 3:08 PM Thank you, John!

Jennifer Proxenos August 9, 2020 at 1:57 PM Wow Kim, this write is awesome my friend, so real, so different and so much a definite win. Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer. Kim Rodrigues August 9, 2020 at 3:30 PM Thank you, Jennifer!

Paghunda Zahid August 8, 2020 at 4:54 PM Nicely written... Stay blessed Kim Rodrigues August 8, 2020 at 5:10 PM Blessings your way! Thank you!

Caren Krutsinger August 7, 2020 at 9:38 PM Your poems get better and better Kim, and they were all stunningly great in the first place. This one is exquisite Kim Rodrigues August 8, 2020 at 4:06 AM You are so kind! Thank you, Caren! xx