Julie Alcin Poet Couplet

Falling To Pieces

The best part of me was always you
Now I don’t know what to do
You are gone so far away
If only I can be with you today

 I’m stuck here feeling so alone
As my heart’s turning into stone
And my mind’s screaming give me love
But you went away to live above

I’m falling to pieces like single tears
I’m breaking apart and releasing my fears
I crave to be cradled in your arms
So you could make me feel so warm

My world is crumbling, turning upside down
While I’m just stuck wearing a frown
I’m dying even more as my sorrow increases
And I’m endlessly hopelessly falling to pieces

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Poet Destroyer A March 16, 2013 at 12:32 PM Julie, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD Julie Alcin March 30, 2013 at 11:38 AM Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words

Joyce Johnson March 14, 2013 at 10:34 PM Congratulations Julie on your winning poem. Love, Joyce Julie Alcin March 30, 2013 at 11:38 AM Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words

Donna Jones March 14, 2013 at 4:00 PM Congratulations Julie Julie Alcin March 30, 2013 at 11:38 AM Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words

Connie Gildersleeve March 14, 2013 at 2:36 PM Julie congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie Julie Alcin March 30, 2013 at 11:39 AM Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 14, 2013 at 10:15 AM Many congratulations Julie xx Julie Alcin March 30, 2013 at 11:39 AM Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words