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Falling To Pieces

The best part of me was always you Now I don’t know what to do You are gone so far away If only I can be with you today I’m stuck here feeling so alone As my heart’s turning into stone And my mind’s screaming give me love But you went away to live above I’m falling to pieces like single tears I’m breaking apart and releasing my fears I crave to be cradled in your arms So you could make me feel so warm My world is crumbling, turning upside down While I’m just stuck wearing a frown I’m dying even more as my sorrow increases And I’m endlessly hopelessly falling to pieces

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/16/2013 12:32:00 PM
Julie, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:38:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
Date: 3/14/2013 10:34:00 PM
Congratulations Julie on your winning poem. Love, Joyce
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:38:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
Date: 3/14/2013 4:00:00 PM
Congratulations Julie
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:38:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
Date: 3/14/2013 2:36:00 PM
Julie congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:39:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
Date: 3/14/2013 10:15:00 AM
Many congratulations Julie xx
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:39:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words

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