Falling Through the Cosmos

Wherever
I happen to fall
The cosmos
Through the sky
My last breath before I die
Will be within space

Russell Sivey

Form: Shadorma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 7:33 PM
ride upon a shooting star, plummet falling travel far, beyond the far horizon... nah i aint sermonising...nah.
Onclaud Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 12:56 PM
devastatingly graceful in form and content, russel.. you last two lines capture the essence of your theme... delighted! :) hugggs!
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February 10, 2012 at 9:32 AM
What a wonderful day I am having sitting here reading such amazing poetry. I am glad yours is amongst the ones I am enjoying reading today Russell. Thank you for sharing it. I hope you have an inspirational weekend. Love, Carol
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February 10, 2012 at 5:02 AM
Free falling hey Russell...just make sure you have someone to catch you xxx
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