Chiquitachiamaka Baity Poet Tetractys

Falling Tears

Tears
                                                    falling
                                          form these thoughts
                                          Staining each line
                         Pain tainted ink scripts my sorrowful Psalms
                      While mending the wounds of my broken heart
                                             Easing the hurt
                                               in each verse
                                                    I find
                                                    Peace

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John Freeman December 17, 2011 at 9:43 AM Congratulations, your choice of form and use is commendable Chiquita, Happy holidays and may the new year see new heights in developement in your poetry. Agape, Moses

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 17, 2011 at 4:10 AM Congratulations x

Bob Quigley December 16, 2011 at 10:56 PM Nicely written Chiquita. Congratulations

Olusegun Arowolo December 16, 2011 at 9:18 PM Nice one,Chichi.Congratulations on your win in Moses`contest....love Olusegun....keep flying Lady ...and longtime...where have you been?

Carol Sunshine Brown December 16, 2011 at 12:56 PM Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Retread" contest Chiquita. Love, Carol

James Peranteau August 16, 2011 at 6:10 PM Ah, as a poet is known to do ! Awsesome write dear poet ! I had a great time reading your writes tonight my friend ! Have a wonderful eve ! Much love, james

Kash Poet August 16, 2011 at 3:38 PM Very touching write here...liked it.

Wole Francis August 16, 2011 at 1:39 PM IS DIS THE CONTINUATION OF 'my emancipation'. i'l like to know.

Saurabh Gupta August 16, 2011 at 11:57 AM very well written.....nice work...thanks for liking my poem.......

Ravindra K Kapoor August 15, 2011 at 3:21 PM Beautiful and quite creative write with a melody of your words. I will read more of your Poems later. Thank you for appreciating my Song 'If you can hear'. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....... Chiquita(Chiamaka) Baity

Bl Devnath August 15, 2011 at 1:10 PM Poetic expression reaches high, nice friend. Carry on...... bl

Dr.Ram Mehta August 15, 2011 at 10:44 AM beautiful poetic expression, Chiquita

Johnny Sumler August 15, 2011 at 9:19 AM You've expressed this form very well with a remarkable tear-jerker. A beautiful pen you have my dear; enjoyed the read!