Falling Tears

Tears
                                                    falling
                                          form these thoughts
                                          Staining each line
                         Pain tainted ink scripts my sorrowful Psalms
                      While mending the wounds of my broken heart
                                             Easing the hurt
                                               in each verse
                                                    I find
                                                    Peace

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John Freeman

Date: 12/17/2011 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations, your choice of form and use is commendable Chiquita, Happy holidays and may the new year see new heights in developement in your poetry. Agape, Moses

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/17/2011 4:10:00 AM

Congratulations x

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/16/2011 10:56:00 PM

Nicely written Chiquita. Congratulations

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 12/16/2011 9:18:00 PM

Nice one,Chichi.Congratulations on your win in Moses`contest....love Olusegun....keep flying Lady ...and longtime...where have you been?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/16/2011 12:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Retread" contest Chiquita. Love, Carol

James Peranteau

Date: 8/16/2011 6:10:00 PM

Ah, as a poet is known to do ! Awsesome write dear poet ! I had a great time reading your writes tonight my friend ! Have a wonderful eve ! Much love, james

Kash Poet

Date: 8/16/2011 3:38:00 PM

Very touching write here...liked it.

Wole Francis

Date: 8/16/2011 1:39:00 PM

IS DIS THE CONTINUATION OF 'my emancipation'. i'l like to know.

Saurabh Gupta

Date: 8/16/2011 11:57:00 AM

very well written.....nice work...thanks for liking my poem.......

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/15/2011 3:21:00 PM

Beautiful and quite creative write with a melody of your words. I will read more of your Poems later. Thank you for appreciating my Song 'If you can hear'. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....... Chiquita(Chiamaka) Baity