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Falling Still Falling for My Truelove

Silently yearning for the heart I've chosen for love to ignite.
With his lips upon mine with the sweet strawberries soft and warm. 
I embark a moonlight flight;  cloudburst wakes me from a sweet dream.

Copyright © Eve Roper | Year Posted 2024

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Sara Kendrick Date: 2/12/2024 4:29:00 AM Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/4/2024 1:53:00 PM This one had a really great ending, Eve. "a cloudburst wakes me from a sweet dream." Such a rude awakening. Thanks for joining in the sijo fun and Congratulations. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/25/2024 9:49:00 AM Sweet strawberry lips…love! Login to Reply

Jerry Brotherton Date: 1/23/2024 5:06:00 PM What a wonderful dream to have. Your word choice is perfection. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2024 10:15:00 AM - The true love, Eve ... so beautifully written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/22/2024 8:20:00 AM I relate to your love poem, as you know. Great imagery and beautiful emotions. Hugs. Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 1/21/2024 2:33:00 AM Oh, quite a dreamy and enchanting write this is dear, Eve.. I love the enticing wordplay here that flows so poetically and beautifully, creating a lavender ambience of romance.. This sijo paints a whimsical image with mellifluous tones and conveys vivid emotions of love in just few words.. "Embark a moonlight flight" I especially loved how you gave it a turn in the third line, absolutely creative and artistic! Sending you many best wishes & light, it's always a wonderful write by you...Love this Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 1/21/2024 2:33:00 AM This is done so beautifully.. an excellent arrangement of words to capture your image.. Login to Reply