Falling Still Falling for My Truelove

Silently yearning for the heart I've chosen for love to ignite.
With his lips upon mine with the sweet strawberries soft and warm. 
I embark a moonlight flight;  cloudburst wakes me from a sweet dream.

i love yousijo

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Sara Kendrick

February 12, 2024 at 4:29 AM

Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

February 4, 2024 at 1:53 PM

This one had a really great ending, Eve. "a cloudburst wakes me from a sweet dream." Such a rude awakening. Thanks for joining in the sijo fun and Congratulations.

Kim Rodrigues

January 25, 2024 at 9:49 AM

Sweet strawberry lips…love!

Jerry Brotherton

January 23, 2024 at 5:06 PM

What a wonderful dream to have. Your word choice is perfection.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 22, 2024 at 10:15 AM

- The true love, Eve ... so beautifully written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

January 22, 2024 at 8:20 AM

I relate to your love poem, as you know. Great imagery and beautiful emotions. Hugs.

Hiya Sharma

January 21, 2024 at 2:33 AM

Oh, quite a dreamy and enchanting write this is dear, Eve.. I love the enticing wordplay here that flows so poetically and beautifully, creating a lavender ambience of romance.. This sijo paints a whimsical image with mellifluous tones and conveys vivid emotions of love in just few words.. "Embark a moonlight flight" I especially loved how you gave it a turn in the third line, absolutely creative and artistic! Sending you many best wishes & light, it's always a wonderful write by you...Love this