Falling Still Falling for My Truelove

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1/21/2024

Silently yearning for the heart I've chosen for love to ignite. With his lips upon mine with the sweet strawberries soft and warm. I embark a moonlight flight; cloudburst wakes me from a sweet dream.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/12/2024 4:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2024 1:53:00 PM

This one had a really great ending, Eve. "a cloudburst wakes me from a sweet dream." Such a rude awakening. Thanks for joining in the sijo fun and Congratulations.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/25/2024 9:49:00 AM

Sweet strawberry lips…love!

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/23/2024 5:06:00 PM

What a wonderful dream to have. Your word choice is perfection.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/22/2024 10:15:00 AM

- The true love, Eve ... so beautifully written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/22/2024 8:20:00 AM

I relate to your love poem, as you know. Great imagery and beautiful emotions. Hugs.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/21/2024 2:33:00 AM

Oh, quite a dreamy and enchanting write this is dear, Eve.. I love the enticing wordplay here that flows so poetically and beautifully, creating a lavender ambience of romance.. This sijo paints a whimsical image with mellifluous tones and conveys vivid emotions of love in just few words.. "Embark a moonlight flight" I especially loved how you gave it a turn in the third line, absolutely creative and artistic! Sending you many best wishes & light, it's always a wonderful write by you...Love this

Silent One

Date: 1/21/2024 2:33:00 AM

This is done so beautifully.. an excellent arrangement of words to capture your image..