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Falling Star

When the dawn embraces the universe Darkness intensifies to cloak the sky The gaze of mortal sees nothing but night Then you rise from above exuding your light You are the moon that reigns above Enduring the sleepless time of wicked sky The prowess of the knight flawlessly conjure elegance A strength that marks within my weakened heart I came to see what hell is all about Just to find out that heaven’s is within my grasp That when I tried to touch its mysterious existence It disappears right before my naked eyes Nightfall conquers the universe Then you came at the darkest hour Shadows are only seen when there’s light And you don’t need it with your contrasting might Blinded oath and selfless dreams Becomes the reason why there are transient wills No one is accepted for well-minded ruler Frosted hope vanishes from nowhere If wisdom is your sanctuary of hope Where principles are vows that cannot be broken Choice is a myth older than a Merlin I am a casualty of this unorthodox ideals Let me be the garish star The fixed luminous shining dot of the night Let me descend and be at my daunting hours Until I find my perfect place in the sky I might be seen by others as the brightest Playing with the gleaming cadence light Again let me subside for several times Or perhaps forever until fate becomes mine A prisoner of this dream might lost Cease to live with passion to change the order But if it’s the only way towards the moonlight I shall walk with this illusion until I die Because my hopes shall live forever That there will come a time That the keeper of the sky might fall To the illusion I weaved, it shall exists To free the soldier of the night To have the liberty in chasing all the odds- And give the privilege To catch this Falling Star…# -dicychael21 3/26/13-

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Date: 4/6/2013 10:05:00 PM
Hi Scunder, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Have yourself a good one. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/26/2013 5:05:00 AM
A good poem, I like it! - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems and here with us. - Wishing you a beautiful Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/26/2013 8:34:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome. I didn't know that people are really reading my work. It is my first time to be in a group of individuals who writes poetry. And it's refreshing. Thanks again.

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