Falling Skies

stardust falls to the ground
                               skies murmur in celestial disarray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 12:55 PM
This is pretty good, Teddy; captivating imagery! Congrats on this deserved win. Regards // paul
Kimathi Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 7:32 AM
Thank you so much Paul, for your warm applause, and enjoying my piece!! :-)
May Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 11:06 AM
Congrats on your win Teddy
Kimathi Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Hi Joseph. Thank you for your applause!! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 9:17 PM
Congrats, Teddy!
Kimathi Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 4:11 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Kim!! *^_^*
Merryman Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 9:04 PM
A great visual, Teddy! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
Kimathi Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 4:09 AM
Thank you so much Kim, for your warm applause!! *^_^* Peace, Teddy.
Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 7:52 PM
stunning imagery in such a short poem. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Kimathi Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 4:06 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea!! *^_^*
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