Falling Rocks

Orange sign weeps stone,
Jagged echoes float upward,
Gravity spins out of tune.
Silent mountains melt,
Crag and gravel softly drift,
Time forgets the falling road.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kauffman Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 11:17 AM
Aloha, William! This sedoka is a sensory treasure! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 6:53 PM
You are appreciated, Sam, Mahalo.
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 9:01 PM
A wonderful read. Congrats
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 6:51 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
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