falling rain

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falling rain brings back sad memories umbrella lifts mood, joy to listen to rhythm of the falling rain

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Jeanette Swan

Date: 1/6/2025 3:12:00 AM

I like the switch in this little poem, from sadness of memory, to the joy of the rain-sound. Faved. I have a lovely memory of being caught in the rain and running together, drenched, with my friend. Rain is so fun with another, and so soggy alone (another scene switch). J :)

Marilene Evans
Date: 1/6/2025 9:27:00 AM

Hello, Jeanette! Thank you for visiting and your kind words. Absolutely agree with you. Being caught in the rain alone is so different with a friend for it is fun.