Falling On Me Bum

There must be something besides love Another good topic for a poem Perhaps I'll write about nature and stuff And the chilly winds a-blowin' October in Canada has that nip in the air That foretells of the season ahead For those that are into those winter sports Bet you're can't get it out of your head Well maybe when I was a very young'un Snow time meant barrels of fun But this guy's quite old and crotchety now Snow means falling on me bum Can't wait for spring just six months to go The months can't go by fast enough Perhaps I'll hibernate just like the bears Then wake up and brush of the dust Don't get me wrong, I'm Canadian eh! It's the law, I'm required to like winter They could lock me up, throw away the key It's also against the law to whimper (sniff!) © Jack Ellison 2013
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Date: 10/24/2013 8:48:00 AM
Ahhhh Jack....needed a warmmmmm smile this chilly morning here in Oklahoma...sooo went straight to the smile shack.....Jack! Very cute....just have to do like I do I guess and make lots of snow ice cream! Yummy!
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Date: 10/24/2013 12:02:00 PM
Hahahaha the "Smile Shack" Love it... you are a sweetie Miss Oklahoma!!! Warm hugs from the north... love Jack xoxox
Date: 10/22/2013 7:29:00 PM
hahaha so cute. (: Got me smiling on this one. Keep yourself on solid ground my friend! No humiliation for this guy! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/22/2013 7:35:00 PM
You are such a sweetie Miss Laura... I missed ya! Big hugz xoxoxox
Date: 10/22/2013 2:55:00 PM
Cute poem, Jack! Don't hibernate just come down here to South Florida like so many Canadians do for winter. Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/22/2013 5:05:00 PM
Been down to Florida many many time but usually the west side... Sarasota, Siesta Key area mostly! Oh to be down there right now!!! You is one lucky lady! Big hugs, Jack xoxox
Date: 10/22/2013 11:36:00 AM
We're glad your son wasn't hurt in the car accident... We all drive Ford Focus (05,08,09), Poor Dragon can't fit in them... With winter we worry about the kids driving... So dragon flys ahead and fires the icy parts of the road while I stay home... and snuggle under a blanket while writting my poetry... Dragons quite a critic now a days... since he's featured in so many... The last 2 were about job interviews without him... What a grump bottom... he's become...LOL ... Silly Dragon!
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Date: 10/22/2013 2:04:00 PM
Absolutely love the term, "grump bottom"!!! May I use it? LOL xoxoxox
Date: 10/22/2013 8:48:00 AM
This was charming. I like the Fall & Spring the most. I wouldn't hibernate though, as tempting as that is. Why would you want to miss out on all those beautiful winter sunrises & sunsets? :) You're awesome, eh! =D
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Date: 10/22/2013 8:59:00 AM
Uh... I think that should have been, "pshaw" LOL
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Date: 10/22/2013 8:58:00 AM
Canadian, eh !!! Fall directly to spring sound good to me... winter sunrises & sunsets... bashaw! LOL
Date: 10/22/2013 6:47:00 AM
Hi Jack so enjoyable and very funny excellent pen Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/22/2013 7:04:00 AM
Can't wait till spring! LOL Thank you my dear Shadow xoxoxox
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