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falling like leaves

       ~ for Karin ~

oh how a fair breeze of Autumn can stir
 my heart with reprieves - the redolent leaves
  remembrance of romance with you in a blur
   soft eyes in a camber of absinthe and amber
  wheaty hair spilling like corn silk to shoulders
 framing two spicy bow lips as they smoldered
falling like leaves … for you

   oh how this time lifts me back to a dream
  our ivy-clad schools - such unripened fools
 a world as our oyster, and raw it would seem
escaped to the woods - discarding our goods
 we swam on a blanket of bright leafy death
  straining in passions to fever each breath
   falling like leaves … for you

oh how the chill always kindled our flame
 pining each week for the rose of your cheek
  weekends adoring the ways that you came
   our fleshy memoirs ‘neath branches and stars
  each mutual climax much sweeter than last
 the moments exhausted like us, far too fast
falling like leaves … for you

   oh Autumn yet sings midst my sinews today
  the libertine flood still coursing my blood
 you ‘waken my core in the most vexing way
when October flies I ache for your sighs
 tho’ marrow grows icy the mem’ry remains
  chaotic obsessions through prurient pains
   someday I’ll surrender them - tears in the rain
    falling like leaves for you …

still falling … in Deja vu.





* This is a very rhythmic and musical form I created called ‘QARINAGE’ I hope you enjoyed it. *

( photographic art created copyright-free by the author with GALA AI software )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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