Barbara Gorelick Poet Rhyme

Falling Into a Dream

Falling  through a sea of confusion
Tumbling about between here and there
Strange objects in the swirling  tide
Of some peculiar figures I am aware
Hoping this moment will quickly end
What is this dream, this strange affair...

A memory, as breaking dawn is here at last
Fitful, tangled, the mood of this day is cast

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Just That Archaic Poet August 21, 2013 at 9:12 AM Hi, Barbara. I loved the first line of your piece; as I've told other poets, when I am jealous that I did not pen that line myself, it must be beautiful and clever. I identified with your piece and you stirred my emotions. Kudos! :)