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Falling Into a Dream

Falling through a sea of confusion Tumbling about between here and there Strange objects in the swirling tide Of some peculiar figures I am aware Hoping this moment will quickly end What is this dream, this strange affair... A memory, as breaking dawn is here at last Fitful, tangled, the mood of this day is cast

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/21/2013 9:12:00 AM
Hi, Barbara. I loved the first line of your piece; as I've told other poets, when I am jealous that I did not pen that line myself, it must be beautiful and clever. I identified with your piece and you stirred my emotions. Kudos! :)
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