Falling In Love With You Was So Easy

Falling in love with you was so easy,
The minute you looked at me I melted
I became a piece of clay that you could
mold however you wanted and I wouldn't
of cared a bit.
My heart beats with a pounding, I feel as
Tho I am going to need oxygen just to
get my next breath, because you have,
taken it away.
I am wanting to run away from you, I feel
afraid all of a sudden, because my mind
reminds of the past loves that are now 
lost and forgotten, but I must take that
chance with you because, I never felt love
like this before.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Williams Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 2:57 AM
simply beautiful
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September 18, 2010 at 5:35 PM
Hello, Rhonda here I am stopping by to say hi and CONGRATULATIONS! What a delightful poem. Had fun reading your featured poem of the week. Take care,.. p.d.
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September 15, 2010 at 9:27 AM
Congrats on your love poem being featured, Rhonda. Vince
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September 13, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Rhonda. Love, Carol
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August 13, 2010 at 7:13 AM
I am feeling the urge to go back and read poetry from earlier writing of my favorite poets today and this is the one I opened of yours Rhonda. I truly enjoyed reading it today and it is one of your best. Love, Carol
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January 23, 2009 at 2:22 PM
you always have to take that chance. it's love M.O. it love it's lust, it's hope. it's oru everything.jhl
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