Falling In Love the First Time

Love Feelings First intense Overpowers Eliminates sense Feels alone Only one Who Knows Love

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Rhona Mcferran

Date: 9/7/2018 3:34:00 AM

Simple, but profound. I had to smile at those middle lines: "Overpowers/ Eliminates sense", so true... Excellent write!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/7/2018 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Rhona. I write what I feel.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/2/2018 8:02:00 PM

A perfect description on a subject that is most difficult to describe in its profoundness! Lovely Caren! : )

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/3/2018 6:08:00 AM

Thank you Connie. It is weird but I am old enough to have a granddaughter in love. And how can that be?

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 9/2/2018 12:25:00 PM

You are right, it only happens once. Maybe a good thing, maybe not.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/2/2018 1:35:00 PM

Although we all know people who are professional at "falling in love" but not so great at keeping it going.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/2/2018 6:56:00 AM

only one who knows its pain, too - I agree with your delivered feel as it was delivered too me! All the best and good, good morning ... CayCay

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/2/2018 10:08:00 AM

I am always amazed that fresh love looks so great but can easily be fleeting and sorrowful quickly.