Falling In Love the First Time

Love                                  
Feelings
First intense
Overpowers
Eliminates sense
Feels alone
Only one
Who Knows
Love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcferran Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 3:34 AM
Simple, but profound. I had to smile at those middle lines: "Overpowers/ Eliminates sense", so true... Excellent write!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Thank you Rhona. I write what I feel.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 8:02 PM
A perfect description on a subject that is most difficult to describe in its profoundness! Lovely Caren! : )
Krutsinger Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 6:08 AM
Thank you Connie. It is weird but I am old enough to have a granddaughter in love. And how can that be?
Godwin Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 6:56 AM
only one who knows its pain, too - I agree with your delivered feel as it was delivered too me! All the best and good, good morning ... CayCay
Krutsinger Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 10:08 AM
I am always amazed that fresh love looks so great but can easily be fleeting and sorrowful quickly.
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