Vijay Pandit Poet Lay

Falling In Love - Lay

Let eyes meet, let them spark a fire
Let rhythms sing to music of lyre

Let heartbeats of joy write our song
In moods of kisses yearned for long

Let blushing cheeks welcome romance
Enchanting heart's seductive dance

Let winds of love ignite our flame
As night, ecstatic, croons your name

December 29, 2019
Placed 3rd: Lay it on me—8x8 poetry contest
Eight syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com)
Sponsor: Charles Messina
Placed 2nd: Strand select 6 by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree November 1, 2020 at 4:32 PM A loving write, Vijay :)

Robertina B. January 21, 2020 at 11:23 AM Congratulations on your win, Vijay.. I absolutely enjoyed your Splendid write.. So romantic and breathtaking, my friend! Have a blessed day.. Vijay Pandit January 21, 2020 at 4:20 PM Thank you Robertina--much appreciate.

J.R. Wren-Ingalls January 19, 2020 at 3:01 PM Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Vijay! I enjoyed reading this! Vijay Pandit January 21, 2020 at 4:20 PM Thank you J.R.--much appreciate.

Eve Roper January 16, 2020 at 10:41 PM Beautiful verse, Vijay, congratulations your win. Eve Vijay Pandit January 18, 2020 at 2:20 PM Many thanks Eve.

Heidi Sands January 16, 2020 at 8:50 AM Congratulations for your beautiful win Vijay :) Vijay Pandit January 18, 2020 at 2:19 PM Much appreciate Heidi--many thanks.

Charles Messina January 16, 2020 at 8:28 AM Very romantic, Vijay. Great flow and rhyme! Congratulations on your win! Blessings ~Charlie Vijay Pandit January 18, 2020 at 2:19 PM Thank you Charlie--much appreciate.

Brenda Chiri January 8, 2020 at 12:30 PM Vijay congratulations on a beautiful top win!;) Vijay Pandit January 9, 2020 at 7:38 AM Much appreciate Brenda--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2020 at 4:51 PM HOW romantic, and how did I ever miss this one you posted earlier! Vijay Pandit January 5, 2020 at 5:05 PM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Silent One January 5, 2020 at 2:47 PM You do romance very well friend... Vijay Pandit January 5, 2020 at 5:05 PM Much appreciate, SO--many thanks.

Hello There January 5, 2020 at 1:30 PM Funny to think such a lovely, flowing poem and thoughts could fit into such a structured format. You've done this beautifully, Vijay! A fave for me. Vijay Pandit January 5, 2020 at 5:04 PM So kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Jennifer Proxenos January 4, 2020 at 8:43 AM Vijay, this is WOW - an excellent write - best wishes for the contest. Blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit January 5, 2020 at 5:04 PM Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2020 at 1:37 PM - A heavenly delight and a heart jewel, dear Vijay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit January 3, 2020 at 4:27 PM Much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks, Anne-Lise.

Ann Gilmour January 2, 2020 at 4:24 AM So romantic are your words of love Vijay. Good luck with your exquisite poetry for I am sure it will reach top place. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Vijay Pandit January 2, 2020 at 7:32 AM You are always so very kind, Ann--much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong January 1, 2020 at 1:18 AM I love this poem Vijay. It captures that longed for romance with such sweet tenderness. Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo Vijay Pandit January 1, 2020 at 7:43 AM So very kind of you Connie--much appreciate--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy December 31, 2019 at 8:47 PM Such a great poem, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit January 1, 2020 at 7:42 AM Many thanks Janice--much appreciate.

Jenish Somadas December 31, 2019 at 1:03 AM Beautiful entry in the contest.. An example for lay.. Good luck.. Vijay Pandit December 31, 2019 at 8:20 AM Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.

Quoth Theraven December 30, 2019 at 9:22 PM Vijay, So enticing a feeling in this Lay. It's nice to find you with hands so busy writing from a light heart. -Richard Vijay Pandit December 31, 2019 at 8:20 AM So kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose December 30, 2019 at 4:13 PM Beautiful poem Vijay, as for Sunshine Smile, on my end it says she has turned off comments and her soup mail is gone too. I was just concerned as to why, Since I cannot contact her, I cannot ask her, but if you can, please make sure she's fine. Thanks. Vijay Pandit December 31, 2019 at 11:44 AM Hi Pixie--she replied--she said she will contact you. Vijay Pandit December 31, 2019 at 8:19 AM I just sent her a note. I will let you know once she replies. But I believe, all is well.

Besma Riabi Dziri December 30, 2019 at 4:04 PM "Falling In Love" and rising in beauty! The tone of your well crafted words is "enchanting the heart" of your reader and enabling a soul to ascend to a top level of artistry! An amazing rendition of your feel and gift! Dear Vijay, your work is both, cherished into my fave list and worthy of an outshining placement.. Happy New Year and warmest wishes.. My deepest regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit December 31, 2019 at 8:12 AM Thank you Besma--always a pleasure to read your kind remarks--many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE. Happy new year! Regards!!

Eve Roper December 30, 2019 at 10:28 AM very well written my friend, should score very high Vijay Pandit December 30, 2019 at 3:55 PM Much appreciate Eve--many thanks.

Richard Lamoureux December 30, 2019 at 9:33 AM Beautifully expressed. Good luck in the contest. Blessings for 2020! Vijay Pandit December 30, 2019 at 3:54 PM Thank you Richard--much appreciate. Best wishes for the new year.

Paul Callus December 30, 2019 at 9:23 AM Beautiful and romantic, Vijay. Falling in love....sparked off by just one deep look! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit December 30, 2019 at 3:54 PM Thank you Paul--hope you are doing well--much appreciate. Best wishes for the new year. Regards.

Joseph May December 30, 2019 at 7:47 AM Well rendered Vijay, GL in the Contest.. Vijay Pandit December 30, 2019 at 3:52 PM Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose December 30, 2019 at 7:25 AM Dear Vijay, nice to read your poetry once again. Yes my story is real, it did happen when I turned 44 and yes I do have photos of the happy occasion. But I cannot post photos as I am not a member, thank you for loving my work, and supported me. xo Vijay Pandit December 30, 2019 at 3:52 PM So glad the ending of the story was positive--much appreciate your comments my friend. All the best in new year!

Demetrios Trifiatis December 30, 2019 at 6:20 AM A symphony of heart's feelings that expresses the falling in love for each-other in a powerful romantic way! Marvelously written dear, Vijay! Good luck my friend! Vijay Pandit December 30, 2019 at 7:09 AM So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks, Demetrios.

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